Can I Spit / Rap Heads Only?

Question

I am the second verse but do i have poetinal should i keep prusing i kno i can get way better but i believe its record deal matireal already ecspecially if i keep at it?

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MlnPFzhBquU


- talkin on my phone

- bustin on a redbone

- facebook my status

- call it pimp ***** zone

- put switches on the shevve

- then i drove it to the levve

- Back to the future flow marty telling *****'s it's heavy

- c me with with pound a weed & hell naw i aint no addict

- but a ***** real high how high

- high as the dust in yo addict

- i herd these *****'s keep talkin **** i go roll up and check em

- just put dark tints on the whip & now tht bass kick bechame

- With a big body so wide

- few hoes inside

- bitche's come like death

- an my doors on the whip is already sucide




- o so you *****'s know karate

- i pop the trunk and grab tht shotti

- tht 3 shots and i'm outtie

- leave them ****** lookin like spah gatti

- God dam these rappers fell off for every apparent reason

- my weed fall 2 but i got every single season

- we blu ray yall dvd and videos casset tapes

- my ****** go bannas we the planet of the apes Mutha fucka

Answer 1

hell yeah u can spit it 4:00 in the mornin and im blowin this like radio but forreal i think u hav some real potential keep it up :)

Answer 2

Is it me or do all rap lyrics sound like the same recycled crap. You should definitely pursue this, it sounds like you have it down pat, bitches/hoes, cars, drugs, some technology reference, guns and how you use them, or how many you have, oh and other rappers who are not as good at rapping about all these things as you are.

Answer 3

karate doesn't rhyme with outtie