Do you like my song lyrics?

Question

Today I stand here,
Waiting for your response,
You don't seem to talk,
But you stare my way,
I can read your signels,
But I seem to think there fake,
I feel the worlds a lie,
And everythings at steak,

I can't answer the worlds questions,
But I can at least think,
Of everything possible,
Has this world turned to hate,
People seem to change,
And brake my chain of trust,
So I can only stand here,
And wonder what to think,

I stand here,
And do nothing good for me,
Only being here,
I don't even speak,
I just move along in this world,
Where everyone is judged,
If we all looked the same,
Would this still be happening?

I can't answer the worlds questions,
But I can at least think,
Of everything possible,
Has this world turned to hate,
People seem to change,
And brake my chain of trust,
So I can only stand here,
And wonder what to think,

I stand here being pushed,
In the direction,
You take me,
You influence me,
I trusted you,
And then you broke my chain,
You broke it,
You left me here to be with my self,

I stand here alone,
Going my own direction,
My path alone,
Now I influence myself,
I'm my own person,
I have my own path,
I can be me now,

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Ok I'll tell you the deeper meaning to it if you don't get it. The point of it is people will influence you to be something your not. They take you to where they are kind of like your there puppets.They control you now and you just wonder where our world has turn to like your kind of depressed because you don't even know who you are anymore. They are turning you to be something your not. So that is what I was trying to get out of this song. Seriously I want the truth to what you think about the lyrics. If they suck I will understand. Well they could really suck because I wrote them in 15 minutes but tell me what you think.

Answer 1

Love it!

Answer 2

My favourite tune (correct now) is Hole In My Pocket through Sheryl Crow You can inform me the sector is circular and I'll end up to you it is rectangular You can preserve your toes at the flooring, however I'll be running on air You're lovely well at ready While I move strolling round Well, that is simply the way in which it's, you realize I acquired a gap in my pocket You supply me love and I drop it I bet I threw it away I acquired a gap in my pocket You supply me love and I drop it I bet I'll throw it away I acquired a 4 leaf clover I'll throw it over my shoulder I'm gonna want it one day o When matters do not move correct you lead me Torn up and tied---you unfastened me When lifestyles is unusual you're taking me Through each difference, you not ever holiday me You acquired a sense there is a wall that you'll not ever climb I you need to be there wherein you're, I you need to be on time But I lose my manner oops... just about the complete tune... they're my favourite materials, regardless that. I bet I just like the complete tune.

Answer 3

depends, what genera will it be going to?

Answer 4

this sounds great!