I wrote this song in 10 minutes?

Question

My song's about making goals and having dreams. It's called The Future is Coming

Donald Simmons
The Future's Coming

What could I be in life?
Someone inspiring others to reach their goal
Or a storyteller, describing my pain and strife
Even start an American shoe dynasty like William Mathias Scholl
(Refrain)

I’ve always wanted to do Communications, be in radio
Like Wendy Williams did, now she’s got a TV show
Or I could be on TMZ, discuss celebrities and go Ay Dios Mio
Get on television, let my show get exposure and grow
(Refrain)

My future has many plans for me
A set out game plan I've to perform and love
Not for the money, not even cause of a college degree
But cause I'll do my job gracefully, like a white dove (Refrain)

Like many adults say, "Children are our future"
And in time I'll be a future motivator, inspire others
Hold on, the future's coming
The future's coming
Influence a songwriter, they could be a caricature
Because in society nothing is possible without mothers (Refrain)

Refrain
I also want to take part in psychology
Figure out why mom's the way she is
Sees her ex, he's on a restraining order, for the US no sensible ideology
Makes us look bad, says we're sneaky and Black and Yellow handed like Whiz

I think I've lost a mental race
Didn't get to the finish line
Had to set my own pace,
It was too slow though, didn't finish my goal in time (Refrain)

Let that be a lesson to all of you
People who are articulate, their goal's having a better world
You can start us off, paint the picture, to which I can't misconstrue
It's excellent, the theme's easily unfurled (Refrain)

When I get to Manalapan High School sophomore year
I'll take part in the drama club
Be in the school musical, and when i act, i'll have no fear
This was my goal, and another actor didn't sub, bubb, oh (Refrain)

I'm moving to Florida in two weeks
My goal there is to make more than one new friend
Not be a hypocrite to people who about looks critiques
I wouldn't know beauty and I'd be homeless in London's West End (Refrain)

Answer 1

all right but how does it go? what tune did you imagine it to go to??



well done though for writing it in 15 mins though - i take 30 mins to write one line!

Answer 2

Cool! I'm in a songwriting temper correct now. I are not able to promise it is going to be lengthy, I'll quit with some thing verse I get to by means of 5 mins. Verse one million: Tumbling alongside by way of the sand Riding toward the promise of a hand The wins blowing by way of my silly hair As I get capable for my possess struggle to naked Verse two: Your eyes are protected with grime and tears As the wailing wind begins to wipe away the brink of worry Dashing by way of the dessert, with out a desire of rain Living by way of loss by means of loss, with out a suggestion of obtain Chorus: And this avenue keep secrets and techniques I will by no means proportion Every different lonely day without difficulty does not examine To the ideas that the wind does not care It's all simply sizzling, blown air Verse three: Tumbleweeds are rolling by means of With a softness that may make you cry As the breeze itself nonetheless whips and howls And the ancient recollections nonetheless take a seat and scowl That's all I bought too.

Answer 3

Are you asking us a question at the top or is it a statement with a question mark at the end?

If it took 10 minutes, then it is worth going back and polishing it some more.

Answer 4

It looks like it took an entire ten minutes.

Answer 5

obviously 10 minutes wasn't long enough