Hey guys? Can you see this lyrics? Please help me...?

00CarpathiA

2012-01-14 06:39:33 UTC

I did my best, i hope this fits in with your music. I did not have to change much, most of your song was correct gramatically. Nice lyrics..

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Refrain:

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One,Two,Three follow me

Girl,do you know that love is free?

Just come with me and I'll show you the liberty

Four,Five,Six give me your lips

Give me your love, I know it's free

I just fell in love with you...

We will run away together!

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Strophe:2

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Baby,when you look into my eyes

Theres a fire in my heart

And I know that I need you more...more and more...

Baby when you I see your eyes

I'm a falling star

And you know, I'm crazy about you

Give me, give me your heart

Bridge:

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Just follow me,come with me

And you will see the liberty.

Refrain:(It's the same as before)

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Strophe:2

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I wanna hold you...

I wanna hold you in my heart

'Cause I need you more and more and more...

I just wanna stay with you

I just wanna take your hand

And I wanna go somewhere far away.

Bridge:(It's the same as before)

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Refrain:(It's the same as before)

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Special:

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Hey Girl,Do you wanna come with me?

Hey Girl, Everything is gonna to be..

Okey! I will show you the liberty

Refrain:(It's the same as before)

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Good Luck =)

Fangirl_DL_TS_LM

2012-01-14 07:14:51 UTC

I'll try my best to correct some words, but its very good!

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Refrain:

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One,Two,Three follow me

Girl,do you know this love is free?

Just come with me and I'll show you the liberty

Four,Five,Six give me your lips

Give me your love,I know it's free

I just fell in love with you...

We run away together!

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Strophe:2

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Baby,when you look to my eyes

You light the fire in my heart

And I know that I need you more...more and more...

Baby when I see your eyes

I'm a falling star

And you know, I'm crazy about you

Give me,give me your heart

Bridge:

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Just follow me,come with me

And you will see the liberty.

Refrain:(It's the same like before)

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Strophe:2

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I wanna hold you...

I wanna hold you inside my heart

'Cause I need you more and more and more...

I just wanna stay with you

I just wanna take your hand

And I wanna go somewhere far away.

Bridge:(It's the same like before)

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Refrain:(It's the same like before)

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Special:

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Hey Girl,Do you wanna come with me?

Hey Girl,Everything is gonna to be..

Okey! I will show you the liberty

Refrain:(It's the same like before)

2016-10-03 14:30:58 UTC

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Jennifer

2012-01-14 07:34:09 UTC

This is really cute. Kinda like a hip hop or even a pop song.

2012-01-14 06:52:38 UTC

its alright

Norita

2012-01-14 06:33:00 UTC

LOVE IT !!!!!!!!!! Very nice I promise!!! :)

Can you please answer my first question need help !! :/