PLEASE ANSWER!!! DO YOU LIKE THESE LYRICS?

Question

Ok. These are my friends lyrics. She wanted me to post them to see what you honestly thought of them. so here they are:

Strike 3:

I called you yesterday
But you never picked up
oh
You say you were busy
Doing homework
When we finally hang out
There's always another girl
With you who isnt me
I pretend like i dont care
But you know that it hurts

Chorus:
This is strike one
You better watch out
Strike two
I'm watching you
Strike three
This means you're out
Now we're done
Cuz it's strike three
yeah yeah yeah
cuz it's strike three
yeah

Oh Oh ooh
i say that we're done
then you say fine
and you walk out the room
then i cry

why me?
why it got to be like this?
why me?
why do i have to deal with this?

why me, why me?
oh, oh
strike one
you better watch out
strike two
i'm watching you
this is strike three
we're done
this is the end
oh oj ooh
oh oh ooh
lalala, lalala

i always though that you were my prince charming
but that i realize you weren't
when will i find him?
my prince charming?



so thats them. heres the link to hear her sing the first verse and chorus: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=J8xH_nw9q...

SO WE WOULD LIKE YO TO BE COMPLETELY HONEST!!! THANKYOU!!!

Answer 1

too many ooh ohhs and ahh ahhs. i cant really find the meaning behind your song, its just angry. usually in a good song theres more than one emotion and a raw truth everyone can relate to. wheather its a happy or sad one. keepp working at it though, its good, just needs some work. ;)

Answer 2

It's pretty good. Yeah it is. So tell me, hon. Is it really your friend, or is it you? Never mind. I guess you could just erase the "i always thought you were my prince charming..." to the end part. It sounds like you're Demi Lovato.

Answer 3

i'm the single and that i shall shop Humanity from The Matrix. do no longer cry for me, i'm no longer lifeless yet. pass away me on my own i'm no longer Superman!!!!! help i desire in answering this question. What the international desires now could be to offer me all the Beer!!!

Answer 4

I loved it! I would just put in another verse to make it a teency bit longer. I'd love to hear it, but the link didn't work.

Hope this helps! :D

Answer 5

There amazing! I love them!!! your friend is so talented! tell them that there lucky not many people I don't think are good with just making lyrics like that lol.

Answer 6

ohhhh myy goddddddd so good

Answer 7

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